" 'Elizabeth is in the drawing room,'Mary tells him.'Mamma has been having another little chat.'
She skips off, jumping on the red tiles in the hall and avoiding the blue, leaving the front door open. At the other end of the hall, the door into the garden is open, and as he reaches to put his hat on the hatstand a breeze lifts the letters on the tray and the front door slams. He likes that, the way houses breathe, the way things move. The door on his left opens and Elizabeth looks around it.
Most women, these days can't peer around doors, can't slip into a room. His friend William claims that his sisters have to squash each other's crinolines to get through their bedroom doors this summer, that they've had to give up lying on sofas after lunch because their skirts would be half-way up the walls.
His mind produces an image, from the sofa's foot, of Will's younger sister Louisa in this position."
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What do you think? Would you keep reading?
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ReplyDeletesounds funny. Have a good week! kelley—the road goes ever ever on
ReplyDeleteIt does but actually this is one of the very few humorous bits. Touches on some serious issues like child prostitution and child abuse.
DeleteThis sounds good - I'd read more.
ReplyDeleteIt's worth reading.
DeleteI am definitely intrigued, Cat. Thanks for sharing...and thanks for visiting my blog.
ReplyDeleteI would recommend it!
DeleteI love the idea of a house breathing. Sounds like a fun book, whether its meant that way or not. Enjoy.
ReplyDeleteIt does sound that way but it's not. It's set in the Victorian era but the issues it raises are just as relevant today.
DeleteSame here, the idea of a house breathing is amazing! And very true because the walls have ears and eyes, so why wouldn't it breathe? The pictures you chose are absolutely amazing and they made reading the Intro a lot more fun! Thanks for dropping by and sorry for such a late visit back! Have a great week!
ReplyDeleteJuli @ Universe in Words